Eurodance tunes- looking for feedback please

[euro1234]

G'day guys,
Here's 2 euro style songs I made recently, I would really appreciate any feedback/suggestions

Euro Force- I Feel You
zSHARE - euro force- i feel you.mp3


Euro Force- Planet Bass
Euro Force - Planet Bass.mp3

Also I was thinking of making another version with a different chorus.
This one isn't finished and hasn't been mixed yet, but I was wondering which one you guys think is better.
Test-planet.mp3

Thanks

[euro1234]

Thanks for the 1 feedback i got!, now it's been deleted?
Any feedback at all would really help me out, can you tell these these are homemade productions?

[Candyman]

Originally Posted by euro1234

G'day guys,
Here's 2 euro style songs I made recently, I would really appreciate any feedback/suggestions

Euro Force- I Feel You
zSHARE - euro force- i feel you.mp3


Euro Force- Planet Bass
Euro Force - Planet Bass.mp3

Also I was thinking of making another version with a different chorus.
This one isn't finished and hasn't been mixed yet, but I was wondering which one you guys think is better.
Test-planet.mp3

Thanks

Patience euro fella most of us music makin' types play with sounds more often then posts but we get there sooner or later

Got 'I Feel You' on as i type this post. Soundin' very pro' to me fella. Got some nice uplifting trancy bit's, vocals are strong, work well. To my ears one or 2 of the single piano notes in the drop off sound a little duff to me? and i would say that you have gone a bit ott with the voice effects on that very last part, can see what ya tryin' all out rock the place for ya endin' 'n all that, but i wouls say soften it a little mate, seems a bit sharp to my ears. Other than them 2 small issues (that are only my personal opinion) it's a top class tune mate, great effort

'Planet Bass' - Very happy hardcore start without the 180bpm Like the sound of this, very uplifting. As a hardcore junkie i would be very tempted to tweek this beast to 170bpm and mash it with some happycore, to me that would sond ace \o/ but there is nowt wrong with this tune the way it's intended to be fella, top stuff

'Test Planet' - I have to say i'm not mainly a vocal person, most tunes with vocals i'll not spin, but the vocals you have used here i kinda like and they work very well. I like the extra bit's in this version, has more going on and sounds much more polished. The breakdown is very smooth and builds up very nice, pure quality mate. This 1 for me is the best out of all 3. \o/

Keep up the good work fella, thanks 4 share'n, enjoyed them .....may even spin 1 in a set 1 week if thats ok?

[euro1234]

Thanks a lot for the feedback matey, much appreciated
I agree, there are a few tweaks that could be made:
the vocals in 'I feel you' are a bit harsh.
'planet base' could maybe be a bit faster, atm its only 136 bpm

I'm glad you liked the 'test planet' version, I wasn't sure if the breakdowns worked, and there's 2 of them. I also wasn't sure about the chourus.
Maybe I'll finish mixing this version now, thanks.

I would love it if you wanted to spin one of them , I see you have a spot on Friday night radio, I'll have to have a listen.
If you did want to, I can easy send you an improved version of whichever song you want.