A good effort there fink
The piano is nice and sharp - all I'd change is re-structure the track to have a more mixable intro/build up and not introduce the piano part as soon, as it doesn't leave you with much else once the track gets going, ie its just the vocals then really.
Maybe some changes to the piano part midway as well to alternate between a couple of sequences, giving the feel of change throughout the track as the piano whilst sounding good, is very laidback and the addition of more notes either overplayed or a total sequence change would give it a boost.
(Not one mention of a Roland TR-... )
