Hi mate just had a listen,have you done this recently?i can tell you love your old school
since this tune is old school sounding i really don't know what to say only that why don't have a go at wrighing some new tunes then i can give you some feedback.Have a go at some Trance,Hardtrance,Hardstyle,Techno or Nu School Breaks
but what every the costs it really does sound like you really enjoying what you are doing and that is the most important thing keep up the good work mate....
O! there is one more thing i have noticed maybe a little help to you,all the samples you are using i think i can regonize certain tunes in your tunes but correct me if i am wrong,if this is the case chop up your own breakbeats and make them your own and i heard a Hoover in your tune which i think is from a tune i have heard,just sample the longest note of it and make that your own to by making yor own riff with it and use some filters on it etc