Cracking sound in the breakdown at 01.12 to 01.25
Varied sounds throughout, I think it'd benefit from a bit of EQ tweaking to give it a warmer feel, and of course extend it by another 3 mins
I was glad you didn't do the usual snare roll (ala hardfloor style) to re-introduce new elements of the track like many other trance records have in them.
The strings that come in at 02.36 reminded me a bit of the filter sweep strings on Salsa House - very nice indeed.
Would love to hear the finished version
(an acid line in this would sound mint imo)